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Post by Cloud on Dec 18, 2009 16:07:39 GMT -5
"It's pretty gangster"
Oh, really? I wasn't aware of that.
"Because we are."
Haha. Really, though...if the Erins thought we didn't know what blood was by now, they must think we have the intellect of rocks.
"That's just funny. "Oh my, you're in trouble? Let me sniff your hair.""
Adding another to your list of hair substitute sayings: She's so hurt it makes me want to do anything to save her hair!
"Herbs that come in a round tin container."
Leafsue should be in one of those health class videos that tells kids not to do drugs, showing her as an example of an addict.
"Ran up against a sawmill?"
Either that or someone there has seriously long claws and animation suspension powers.
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Post by Ten on Dec 18, 2009 16:21:31 GMT -5
"Oh, really? I wasn't aware of that."
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Well, sort of. It's not just gangsters. A lot of guys around here will nod to acknowledge each other, same as anyone else would smile or say hi.
"Leafsue should be in one of those health class videos that tells kids not to do drugs, showing her as an example of an addict."
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Remember, kids. Chewing tobacco will get you pregnant.
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Post by Cloud on Dec 18, 2009 16:26:54 GMT -5
"Chewing tobacco will get you pregnant."
...what?
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Post by Ten on Dec 18, 2009 16:45:01 GMT -5
Leafsue chews herbs.
She had kits when she wasn't supposed to.
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Post by Cloud on Dec 18, 2009 16:57:51 GMT -5
I thought so, but was unsure.
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Post by Cloud on Dec 20, 2009 4:27:27 GMT -5
Chapter 17, Part 2
“Sandstorm shook her head. “She was fighting beside me down on the shore, but I thought she was okay. She was never down for more than a moment.””
Ok, this PROVES Squirrelflight is (or was) a zombie and has super-speed powers. And it also proves that whoever assaulted her does too, to have made that big of a wound in that short of a time. But apparently Squirrelflight lost her zombieness when she returned to camp for the sake of Drama. -_-
“Brambleclaw crouched beside his mate. “Don’t leave me,” He begged.”
She ain’t goin’anywhere, Bramble. At least not for a while.
“Leafpool won’t let you die.”
Unless she’s promised more little round tins of herbs to do so.
“Hollypaw felt a thorn-sharp stab in her heart.”
“Thorn-sharp” has been used so many times to describe things, it’s getting old. Why not claw-sharp or fang-sharp or briar-sharp or something? Psst, it’s called a thesaurus, Erins.
““Surely the battle is over?” She mewed. “What’s left to talk about?””
Plenty.
““StarClan has told us we mustn’t fight!”
…um. No. They haven’t. They haven’t said anything, remember? How would you know, anyway? The eclipse could mean anything, you don’t know for sure.
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Post by Cloud on Dec 20, 2009 4:39:56 GMT -5
Chapter 18 “The clearing was slowly emptying as Firestar moved from cat to cat, ordering them to their dens to rest.” I think they’d be going to do that anyway…oh no wait. I forgot they’re all idiots. “ThunderClan would make them pay for what they’d done.” He’s talking about WindClan and RiverClan. And I didn’t realize Failstar had elected him leader all of a sudden. “But the sun disappeared and Sol knew it would happen! Don’t you realize what this means?” That StarClan fails? No duh. “We have the power of the stars in our paws!” More you like you have the powers of gary-stuness and idiocy in your brains. Neither of you are huge, gas-burning, or explode into supernovas. Yay supernovas.  |
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Post by Ten on Dec 20, 2009 17:08:16 GMT -5
"Plenty."
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Like what?
"The eclipse could mean anything, you don’t know for sure."
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What with StarClan and their oh-so-effective communication skills.
"And I didn’t realize Failstar had elected him leader all of a sudden."
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Elected whom leader?
"We have the power of the stars in our paws!"
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That's not the conclusion he gets from Sol knowing the sun would disappear, is it?
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Post by Cloud on Dec 20, 2009 17:22:28 GMT -5
"Like what?"
Why WindClan attacked, if they could stop them, etc.
"What with StarClan and their oh-so-effective communication skills."
Yeah. They should be fined every time they do something cryptic/useless.
"Elected whom leader?"
Lionpaw teh violent luster.
"That's not the conclusion he gets from Sol knowing the sun would disappear, is it?"
No. The conclusion he gets from knowing Sol knew the sun would disappear is that they should go find him.
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Post by Ten on Dec 20, 2009 17:25:29 GMT -5
"Lionpaw teh violent luster."
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mm, I'm sure Gramps won't get in the way of what Lionpaw wants.
"The conclusion he gets from knowing Sol knew the sun would disappear is that they should go find him."
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What for?
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