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Owlpelt
Aug 18, 2009 4:52:48 GMT -5
Post by ravyn on Aug 18, 2009 4:52:48 GMT -5
I will fix him
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Owlpelt
Aug 26, 2009 16:39:03 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Aug 26, 2009 16:39:03 GMT -5
"He has a pair of white, round ears"
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Now that I think about it, I haven't seen this marking pattern on a cat before. Have you?
"He had never" <-- has never?
"Leader? Of course he wants it." <-- one, instead of it?
"and all that leader stuff"
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which is...?
"In his past times he had been very bossy and cranky"
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How so?
"Barktail became an apprentice and to a proud and loyal Warrior." <-- lowercase
"Who mentored him? Dawnpelt."
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You could put that in the previous sentence.
"Dawnpelt was Barktail's father."
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mmkay, even though the name seems feminine.
"Dawnpelt was a very charming and gentle cat."
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How was he charming?
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Gosh
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Owlpelt
Sept 4, 2009 17:44:51 GMT -5
Post by Gosh on Sept 4, 2009 17:44:51 GMT -5
" In his past times he had been very bossy and cranky"
This made me think 'in his past lives'. xP
Also, would Dawn be an okay prefix? Considering that the cats probably couldn't see much of the dawn and the cat in question would have to be a pinkish-yellow...
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Owlpelt
Sept 4, 2009 19:07:41 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Sept 4, 2009 19:07:41 GMT -5
"Also, would Dawn be an okay prefix?"
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mm... it's up for debate. I see Dawn as being interchangeable with Light.
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Owlpelt
Sept 5, 2009 0:28:06 GMT -5
Post by Gosh on Sept 5, 2009 0:28:06 GMT -5
mm... it's up for debate. I see Dawn as being interchangeable with Light.
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Mm. I suppose that's a good argument. I do want to congratulate you, Ravyn, on going against the norm and having a male cat with a Dawn prefix. xP
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Owlpelt
Oct 22, 2009 2:22:04 GMT -5
Post by ravyn on Oct 22, 2009 2:22:04 GMT -5
Ok..
SO I haven't been on for a while and had fixed all the things.
I had changed Dawnpelt's name to Brownpelt.
I wanna roleplay!!! x))
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Owlpelt
Oct 22, 2009 19:16:32 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Oct 22, 2009 19:16:32 GMT -5
I'm afraid Bark is now a taken prefix.
Give him a new name, though, and I think he'll be good to go.
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Owlpelt
Oct 23, 2009 2:06:57 GMT -5
Post by ravyn on Oct 23, 2009 2:06:57 GMT -5
YIPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok...
so..
I will change it as.....striped.
Blah! I don't like it...
Then....
Since I don't have anything in my head at the moment I will just change it to striped.
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Owlpelt
Oct 23, 2009 19:43:20 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Oct 23, 2009 19:43:20 GMT -5
Stripedtail? That's vague. Tabby is a dominant gene in cats, so having stripes is more than common. Have you looked at any of the prefix suggestions on the names thread?
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Post by ravyn on Dec 4, 2009 3:08:36 GMT -5
I think I would like to use Owlstripes. (?)
And if we are not allowed to use 'owl' then I will use... brown??
Just trying to make things easier. xDD
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