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Post by ravyn on Jul 6, 2009 7:25:09 GMT -5
I fixed it.
-sighs- Hard time getting him accepted xDD
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Owlpelt
Jul 6, 2009 11:07:16 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 6, 2009 11:07:16 GMT -5
I would prefer you would answer my questions in your post, please.
"mentor some apprentices ." <-- no space
"Like, bringing the whole enclosure to a place that is more cooler and a area that has more edible prey."
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o.o What? He wants them to pick up the whole enclosure and move it?
"This tom was born with everybody in the enclosure."
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This makes it sound like everyone was born at the same time.
"And when he got old enough, Barktail became an apprentice to warrior."
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Do you mean to express progression or say that he was apprenticed to a warrrior?
"Who mentored him? Dawnpelt."
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Who's that? A random stranger?
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Owlpelt
Jul 8, 2009 22:44:51 GMT -5
Post by ravyn on Jul 8, 2009 22:44:51 GMT -5
I would prefer you would answer my questions in your post, please.
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I did in my post.
o.o What? He wants them to pick up the whole enclosure and move it?
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No, sorry, I meant the cats. Everybody in the enclosure
This makes it sound like everyone was born at the same time.
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Kay. I removed the "everbody"
Do you mean to express progression or say that he was apprenticed to a warrrior?
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I forgot the "a warrior" xD Sowwie
Who's that? A random stranger?
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His mentor. Well....duh~~xD
And he was born in the enclosure.
No random stranger!!
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Owlpelt
Jul 8, 2009 22:48:32 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 8, 2009 22:48:32 GMT -5
"I meant the cats."
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He wants to move the cats to a different place?
As in... leave the enclosure?
"His mentor."
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So... his parents went up to a random cat and said, "mentor our son"?
"And he was born in the enclosure."
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Of course he was, silly goose.
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Owlpelt
Jul 8, 2009 22:56:31 GMT -5
Post by ravyn on Jul 8, 2009 22:56:31 GMT -5
He wants to move the cats to a different place?
As in... leave the enclosure?
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-nods- Yup.
So... his parents went up to a random cat and said, "mentor our son"?
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Why? they can't? :3
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Owlpelt
Jul 8, 2009 22:59:25 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 8, 2009 22:59:25 GMT -5
"Yup."
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So he's insane?
"Why? they can't?"
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If his mentor isn't related to him, explain how he got his mentor in the History.
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Owlpelt
Jul 8, 2009 23:11:00 GMT -5
Post by ravyn on Jul 8, 2009 23:11:00 GMT -5
So he's insane?
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No. Who would wanna live under a scorching sun, with few prey, almost no water and no herbs to treat them when the get hurt?
If his mentor isn't related to him, explain how he got his mentor in the History.
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Kay.
But all the cats don't have a mentor?
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Owlpelt
Jul 8, 2009 23:14:41 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 8, 2009 23:14:41 GMT -5
"Who would wanna live under a scorching sun, with few prey, almost no water and no herbs to treat them when the get hurt?"
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You can think it's awful all you want, but it's what he was born and raised in. He doesn't have anything better to compare it to. So he is insane?
"But all the cats don't have a mentor?"
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...What are you asking?
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Owlpelt
Jul 10, 2009 8:08:41 GMT -5
Post by ravyn on Jul 10, 2009 8:08:41 GMT -5
You can think it's awful all you want, but it's what he was born and raised in. He doesn't have anything better to compare it to. So he is insane?
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He must heard about other places that has better food than here from the elders.
...What are you asking?
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You know the other Warriors? Does all of them have a mentor? If so...which cat? Cuz I am getting mixed up. How do they normally get a mentor? Or does these cats just live without mentors?
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Owlpelt
Jul 10, 2009 19:15:32 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 10, 2009 19:15:32 GMT -5
"He must heard about other places that has better food than here from the elders."
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Why were they making up stuff?
Why did he believe them?
"How do they normally get a mentor?"
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Most cats had their parents as their mentors. Did you read the Lifestyle Differences?
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