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Rainpaw
Jun 26, 2009 18:25:30 GMT -5
Post by raindapple on Jun 26, 2009 18:25:30 GMT -5
Role player| Elizabeth
Name| Rainpaw (Raindapple when warrior)
Gender| She-cat (around 7 moons old)
Physical Description| Rainpaw is a tabby cat, a light tan with dark stripes. Her eyes are an intense green.
Views| Even though she has a very long way to go, Rainpaw dreams of someday being a great and powerful leader. She believes that the cats should become a clan, because everyone would be safer and more secure.
Kin| Rainpaw never knew her father. Her mother’s name was Skystripe, and her siblings were Mousekit and Boulderkit.
History| Rainpaw has only heard stories of her father from her mother. She had never met him. She imagines one day finding him, after she earns her warrior name.
Sparrowleaf and Rainpaw were very close, but her mother devoted her life to feeding her kits, and slowly starved to death. Rainpaw does not know what happened to her siblings.
Rainpaw, not knowing if her siblings are alive, still mourns for her mother this very day.
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Rainpaw
Jun 27, 2009 8:50:48 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jun 27, 2009 8:50:48 GMT -5
"Tabby cat,"
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Did you read the note about complete sentences?
"light tan with dark stripes (lines)."
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We know what stripes are; no need to call them lines.
"Blue/Green eyes (how she got 'rain' in her name)"
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Nope. Kits are born with their eyes closed.
"Will this actually happen? Who knows..."
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How are these two sentences her views?
"She has started having dreams, and has even seen a cat or two that wasn’t actually there?"
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So she's insane?
"other denmates: Squirrel, and Boulder"
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What do you mean, denmates?
"Before coming to the clan"
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There is no Clan.
"separated at the scene of an attack by vicious coyotes"
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There aren't any coyotes in the enclosure.
"eating plants and flowers from cacti and bushes"
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There aren't any plants either.
Did you read the plot?
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Rainpaw
Jun 27, 2009 9:27:47 GMT -5
Post by raindapple on Jun 27, 2009 9:27:47 GMT -5
Role player| Elizabeth
Name| Rainpaw (Raindapple when warrior)
Gender| She-cat (around 7 moons old)
Physical Description| Rainpaw is a tabby cat, a light tan with dark stripes. Her eyes are an intense green.
Views| Even though she has a very long way to go, Rainpaw dreams of someday being a great and powerful leader. She believes that the cats should become a clan, because everyone would be safer and more secure.
Kin| Rainpaw never knew her father. Her mother’s name was Sparrowleaf, and her siblings were Squirrelkit and Boulderkit.
History| Rainpaws mother did not talk to the other cats very much, so instead of Rainkit, she just name her Rain.
Rainpaw has only heard stories of her father from her mother. She had never met him. She imagines one day finding him, after she earns her warrior name.
Sparrowleaf and Rainpaw were very close, but her mother devoted her life to feeding her kits, and slowly starved to death. Rainpaw does not know what happened to her siblings.
Rainpaw, not knowing if her siblings are alive, still mourns for her mother this very day.
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Rainpaw
Jun 27, 2009 9:32:36 GMT -5
Post by raindapple on Jun 27, 2009 9:32:36 GMT -5
One thing: Are we allowed to have anything about Starclan?
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Rainpaw
Jun 27, 2009 9:42:45 GMT -5
Post by Darky [Megan] on Jun 27, 2009 9:42:45 GMT -5
"Okay, one thing: She did not live in the enclosure..."
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Did you read the plot? The enclosure has been here for decades - Rainpaw would be ashes by now if she had lived before that time.
Did you know that you can modify your posts? I think you should simply modify your bio instead of posting it twice.
"Are we allowed to have anything about Starclan?"
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If you had read the Plot and Rules thoroughly you would know that Starclan does not exist in the enclosure.
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Rainpaw
Jun 27, 2009 21:45:03 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jun 27, 2009 21:45:03 GMT -5
Yes, please modify your original post rather than repost it. That way when people view the bio they don't have to search through the thread - they just read the first post.
"If you had read the Plot and Rules thoroughly you would know that Starclan does not exist in the enclosure."
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It doesn't exist at all.
Plus, once they were sealed inside the enclosure, they lost all faith in it.
Cats today haven't even heard of StarClan.
"She has intense Blue/Green eyes." <-- blue-green?
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So are they more blue or more green?
"Her mother’s name was Sparrow, and her siblings were Squirrel and Boulder."
"instead of Rainkit, she just name her Rain."
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Why? The Clan naming system is the only one they know. Though names have befome more rogue-like in that they don't require honor or respectibility in them, what reason would they have not to have a suffix?
"She imagines one day finding him."
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So why doesn't she?
"wishes she could go back in time and hunt for them."
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Why would she want to go back in time? She can just look around.
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Rainpaw
Jun 28, 2009 9:51:20 GMT -5
Post by raindapple on Jun 28, 2009 9:51:20 GMT -5
"It doesn't exist at all.
Plus, once they were sealed inside the enclosure, they lost all faith in it.
Cats today haven't even heard of StarClan."
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Okay, I get it.
"So are they more blue or more green?"
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They are more blue then green, but the colors are not mixing together. Here eyes are blue near the pupil and start to become a green around the outside.
"Why? The Clan naming system is the only one they know. Though names have befome more rogue-like in that they don't require honor or respectibility in them, what reason would they have not to have a suffix?"
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Yeah, I forgot to fix that. I originally had them without the suffix because I was having them as rogues, but then I learned that all cats have lived in the enclosure for decades, so I fixed them.
"So why doesn't she?"
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She wants to finish training as an apprentice, so that she can be ready so search at all costs.
"Why would she want to go back in time? She can just look around."
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Um, nevermind that part! I dont really get it now either ;]
I have a question (sorry if this is already answered): How do I find a mentor for my apprentice??
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Rainpaw
Jun 28, 2009 10:51:20 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jun 28, 2009 10:51:20 GMT -5
"They are more blue"
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Have you checked the prices?
"She wants to finish training as an apprentice"
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...but no one's training her?
"How do I find a mentor for my apprentice?"
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Through role play.
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Rainpaw
Jun 29, 2009 12:08:37 GMT -5
Post by raindapple on Jun 29, 2009 12:08:37 GMT -5
"Have you checked the prices?"
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Wow...you have to PAY to have EYES??
Great. I guess they have to be green.
"...but no one's training her?"
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Yes! No one is training her yet because I havent gotten to roleplay because my cat hasnt been accepted yet! You see my problem?!
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Rainpaw
Jun 29, 2009 13:09:22 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jun 29, 2009 13:09:22 GMT -5
"Wow...you have to PAY to have EYES??"
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It sounds funny when you say it that way.
No, you don't have to pay to have eyes.
You have to pay to get a character accepted if
said character has a rare eye color.
"No one is training her yet because I havent gotten to roleplay because my cat hasnt been accepted yet! You see my problem?!"
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It's not a problem at all.
You know you can edit your posts, right?
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