Rainpaw

[raindapple]

Sigh...I am getting so confused.

Yes, I know I can edit posts. I am editing my bio thing as we go along.

How do I get a mentor when I cant roleplay?? Where do I go?

[Ten]

"Sigh...I am getting so confused."
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About what?


"I am editing my bio thing as we go along."
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The first post of this thread hasn't changed.


"How do I get a mentor when I cant roleplay?"
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No, silly goose. You get a mentor after she's accepted.

[raindapple]

"About what?"
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I dont know... this is just taking so long

"The first post of this thread hasn't changed."
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Oh! You have been looking at that one? I have been editing the second bio that I had put! But nevermind! I will edit the first one instead (It is now edited)

"No, silly goose. You get a mentor after she's accepted."
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Okay, because you had asked me something about not having a mentor...so I asked you that...okay.

[Ten]

"this is just taking so long"
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You think this is long? Take a look at some other character threads.


"You have been looking at that one?"
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Of course. When people click to view this bio, that's the one they're going to read.


"Okay, because you had asked me something about not having a mentor...so I asked you that...okay."
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Yes, I understand how you were confused.


"Her mother’s name was Sparrowleaf, and her siblings were Squirrelkit and Boulderkit."
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How would they know about sparrows or squirrels?


"Rainpaws mother did not talk to the other cats very much, so instead of Rainkit, she just name her Rain."
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Why?
And then all of a sudden you start calling her Rainpaw.
Did her mother give her that name when she started training her?


"She imagines one day finding him"
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Why?


"Rainpaw does not know what happened to her siblings."
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What do you mean? Did they just... walk away?

[raindapple]

"You think this is long? Take a look at some other character threads."
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Yeah, I noticed some people are waiting even longer to roleplay.


"Of course. When people click to view this bio, that's the one they're going to read."
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Oops, Yeah, I thought you would see that I had a different one, a newer one. I am editing the first one now, though. I am going to delete the other bio.


"Yes, I understand how you were confused."
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Yeah, haha. :)


"How would they know about sparrows or squirrels?"
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I will fix that :(


"Why?
And then all of a sudden you start calling her Rainpaw.
Did her mother give her that name when she started training her?"
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Sorry! I forgot to edit that part, because I had put that there when I had the family as loners. I didnt realize that was still there.


"Why?"
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Well, she wants to finish her training. She also really wants to meet him, so she keeps replaying her version in her head.


"What do you mean? Did they just... walk away?"
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When their mother died, they were still kits (almost the age of becoming an apprentice) so they didnt exactly have the brains (Should I put it that way? xD) to stay together. She hopes that they found some nice cats to help them, like she did (She got lucky anough to find a cat that took her in until she was old enough to take care of herself).

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SORRY! I had to leave, and when I came back I thought I had finished the whole thing, so sorry!

[Ten]

"Yeah, I noticed some people are waiting even longer to roleplay."
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Shadestream took six pages to get accepted.


"Well, she wants to finish her training."
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She wants her dad to mentor her?


"She also really wants to meet him,"
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That's what I was asking - why does she want to meet them?


"they were still kits (almost the age of becoming an apprentice) so they didnt exactly have the brains (Should I put it that way? xD) to stay together."
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They were about five months old and just decided to walk away from each other?


"She hopes that they found some nice cats to help them, like she did (She got lucky anough to find a cat that took her in until she"
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...? I take it you'll finish that sentence?

[raindapple]

"Shadestream took six pages to get accepted."
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Wow! Why did it take that long?!


"She wants her dad to mentor her?"
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No, she wants to become a warrior (she will already have a mentor)


"That's what I was asking - why does she want to meet them?"
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Well, he is her father! If you didnt know your dad, wouldnt you want to meet him? I would! She wants to know what he was like, and to finally say she knows her dad.


"They were about five months old and just decided to walk away from each other?"
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How about...we will put it this way: They were mourning for their mother, and so confused. They hadnt been on their own before, because even when their mom was hunting, she never strayed far. So they were trying to find her (She hadnt died with them, she was trying to hunt, fainted, and didnt wake up) and couldnt find each other again.


"...? I take it you'll finish that sentence?"
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Sorry, I fixed it. I had to leave, but I hadnt sent this yet. I thought I had it finished

[Ten]

"Why did it take that long?!"
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I don't remember. You can go look, if you'd like.


"If you didnt know your dad, wouldnt you want to meet him?"
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-shrug- I know my dad, so I don't know what it's like to not know him.


"She wants to know what he was like,"
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Has he ever tried to look for her?


"They were mourning for their mother, and so confused. They hadnt been on their own before, because even when their mom was hunting, she never strayed far. So they were trying to find her (She hadnt died with them, she was trying to hunt, fainted, and didnt wake up)"
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So... they were confused because they were grieving, and looked for her because they thought she was alive?


"and couldnt find each other again."
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Why not?


"She got lucky anough to find a cat that took her in until she was old enough to take care of herself"
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Who? A random stranger?
Did s/he teach her to hunt?

[raindapple]

"I don't remember. You can go look, if you'd like."
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Okay.


"-shrug- I know my dad, so I don't know what it's like to not know him."
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Well, okay.


"Has he ever tried to look for her?"
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No, he didnt know that Rainpaw's mom had kits. He left her because his love for her was a temporary crush.


"So... they were confused because they were grieving, and looked for her because they thought she was alive?"
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Well, at first they were puzzled. They tried looking for her, but couldnt find her. Then they becamse very scared, and eventually sad because their mom was gone. They eventually wandered off and couldnt find each other again (they may find each other later).


"Why not?"
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They got lost, and didnt know how to track because they werent taught that.


"Who? A random stranger?
Did s/he teach her to hunt?"
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Yes, this cat taught her to hunt. And the cat pretty much was a random stranger. A cat nice enough to think of others in needd.

[Ten]

"No,"
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And after that they never, ever encountered each other again?


"They tried looking for her, but couldnt find her."
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Why not?


"They got lost,"
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How could they get lost in a place like this?


"Yes, this cat taught her to hunt."
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How well? Crickets? Lizards? Rats?
Have you added this in the bio?


edit: ya lahwy, I feel stupid now.
I'm sorry that I just now realized this.
Rain is already a taken prefix.