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Post by destiny on Mar 30, 2010 17:59:51 GMT -5
Cool, that sounds good also.
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Post by Ten on Mar 30, 2010 19:28:33 GMT -5
"I'm sorry about the time it took for me to reply/sort this." -- Two days is nothing. I'm just glad you're not one of those people who posts a bio and then never comes back.
"I have only just settled back in at home from a big day out and I'm sort of sad at the moment." -- Aw. Just the blues, or did something happen?
"I've changed them all, do you want me to list them all?" -- Nah, let's just move on.
"'Ravenheart's parents were very protective of their first born, as he had no litter mates, often keeping him away from the things he was dying to learn and experience for himself. Ravenheart longed to experience the feeling of being able to prowl around by himself, to not have the watchful eyes of his parents following him around as he explored. He longed to learn new skills, to be like his parents, who always seemed to be out hunting and exploring.'" -- So why did they make him stay in one place instead of walking around/exploring with him?
"Okay, but I don't know what to say to this. I could always take this bit out and leave it or just put he sort of became used to it or something?" -- Your call: did something happen to make him want a change in his lifestyle, or was he used to it?
"'His mother and father had left to go for a quick hunt, thus enabling him to explore from the depths of their little hideaway, which was hidden deep under thick pieces of wood and stone.'" -- They live underneath the wall?
"Yes, because one of the two usually stayed behind and watched over him." -- What change required they both leave him this time?
Wait. You said they never let him hunt, right? How did they give him warrior training?
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Post by destiny on Apr 2, 2010 14:13:15 GMT -5
"I'm sorry about the time it took for me to reply/sort this." -- Two days is nothing. I'm just glad you're not one of those people who posts a bio and then never comes back.
I'll always come back. I really like it here! (:
"I have only just settled back in at home from a big day out and I'm sort of sad at the moment." -- Aw. Just the blues, or did something happen?
Ahh, yeah.. heart ache.
"I've changed them all, do you want me to list them all?" -- Nah, let's just move on.
Ok.
"'Ravenheart's parents were very protective of their first born, as he had no litter mates, often keeping him away from the things he was dying to learn and experience for himself. Ravenheart longed to experience the feeling of being able to prowl around by himself, to not have the watchful eyes of his parents following him around as he explored. He longed to learn new skills, to be like his parents, who always seemed to be out hunting and exploring.'" -- So why did they make him stay in one place instead of walking around/exploring with him?
They were just very protective and often wanted to go and venture about themselves whilst leaving him behind or one of them would watch over him whilst the other was hunting.
"Okay, but I don't know what to say to this. I could always take this bit out and leave it or just put he sort of became used to it or something?" -- Your call: did something happen to make him want a change in his lifestyle, or was he used to it?
He was just used to it really, but even though he was used to it, he still craved for a change.
"'His mother and father had left to go for a quick hunt, thus enabling him to explore from the depths of their little hideaway, which was hidden deep under thick pieces of wood and stone.'" -- They live underneath the wall?
Sort of like that, yeah!
"Yes, because one of the two usually stayed behind and watched over him." -- What change required they both leave him this time?
I think it was because they were desperate for food, so they decided to go out hunting together this time and their kit was getting older, so they decided leaving him for a short while wouldn't be too dangerous.
Wait. You said they never let him hunt, right? How did they give him warrior training?
Ahh, good point! I think this could be after his father was killed then, that's when his mother took him into training instead.
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Post by Ten on Apr 2, 2010 18:10:55 GMT -5
"I'll always come back. I really like it here!" -- Me too. :3
"Ahh, yeah.. heart ache." -- awuh. D=
"They were just very protective and often wanted to go and venture about themselves whilst leaving him behind or one of them would watch over him whilst the other was hunting." -- I know. Why didn't they have him come along with them? How is staying in one place safer?
"He was just used to it really, but even though he was used to it, he still craved for a change." -- Why would he crave a change?
"Sort of like that, yeah!" -- How could they have a cave under the wall?
"I think it was because they were desperate for food," -- Why weren't they desperate for food before? What changed?
"I think this could be after his father was killed then," -- mmkay.... Remind me, how was his father killed?
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