Dappleheart

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^{still awaiting permission to officially use this image}

Name| Dappleheart

Gender| She-Cat

Physical Description| Dappleheart is a light brownish-grey she-cat with darker, broken mackerel tabby markings. Her eyes are green, and her body is average sized for her estimated age (adult).

Views| Dappleheart is a con, not believing that cats so different from each other can work together in a Clan, considering most that she's met are very argumentative. She's never believed the story of RiverClan, due to the fact that she is pretty narrow-minded about a Clan or Clans in the first place, but she does believe that the outside world exists.

Kin| Shadefur: Father; black cat with green eyes; deceased.
Speckletail: Mother; light grey tabby cat with amber eyes; deceased.
One brother; name unknown; deceased.

History| Dappleheart was raised by both her father and mother for a short time, and then only her mother raised her (Shadefur was killed when he tried to claim already owned territory). They were never very close due to very different personalities, and the impossibility to get along well together, though Speckletail loved her kit. In the efforts to keep her kit alive without a provider for the family, Speckletail usually hunted for only her daughter, and rarely for herself. Though Dappleheart was very grateful and appreciative of her mother's efforts, she was worried for her health. Her worries accelerated all too late, for Speckletail passed away young. Dappleheart lived on her own afterward, not willing to claim territory for herself, and not completely comfortable with strangers.

[Ten]

"still awaiting permission to officially use this image"
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Roger. Notify me when you get it.


"Dappleheart is a light brownish-grey she-cat with darker, mackerel tabby markings."
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So why is Dapple her prefix?


"Her eyes are green, and her body is average sized for her estimated age; adult."
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Adult could go after a dash or in parenthesis, but not after a semicolon... unless you mean adult as a sentence?


"Dappleheart is a con, not believing that cats so different from each other can work together in a Clan, considering most that she's met are very argumentative."
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If a Clan were possible in her mind, would she want one? Or is it just the implausibility of it in her mind that dissuades her from supporting it?


"killed when trying to claim already owned territory."
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These things are history. The kin section is the names of any relations you reference and how they relate to her.


"Speckletail: Mother; light grey tabby cat with auburn eyes;"
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Auburn eyes? What do you mean?


"No siblings known of."
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Are there any siblings?


"and then only her mother"
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And then only her mother what?


"They were never very close, though Speckletail loved her kit."
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So why weren't they close?


"In the efforts to keep her kit alive without a provider for the family, Speckletail usually hunted for only her daughter, and rarely for herself."
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This was between Dappleheart's weaning and her apprenticeship, then? How could Speckletail hunt if she wasn't getting any nutrition?


"lived on her own afterword" <-- afterward


"not completely comfortable with strangers."
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Were her parents the only cats she ever spoke with?

[✖ s a n n i]

Roger. Notify me when you get it.
~x~
Will do, Captain Ten. Salutes.


So why is Dapple her prefix?
~x~
I meant broken-mackerel, but would that still not work?


Adult could go after a dash or in parenthesis, but not after a semicolon... unless you mean adult as a sentence?
~x~
I just realized that the way I used it doesn't make sense; I'll switch it to parenthesis.


If a Clan were possible in her mind, would she want one? Or is it just the implausibility of it in her mind that dissuades her from supporting it?
~x~
The implausibility of it. Would you like me to add that to the application?


These things are history. The kin section is the names of any relations you reference and how they relate to her.
~x~
I'll switch it over.


Auburn eyes? What do you mean?
~x~
I really need to pay more attention when I'm writing. I meant amber.


Are there any siblings?
~x~
There were. She had a brother who died a few days after his birth. If you would like me to mention him, would you like me to name him as well?


And then only her mother what?
~x~
"...and then only her mother raised her." I'll add that to the end.


So why weren't they close?
~x~
Different personalities. They didn't get along well. Would you like me to stick that in there?


This was between Dappleheart's weaning and her apprenticeship, then? How could Speckletail hunt if she wasn't getting any nutrition?
~x~
Yes, it was. Speckletail was getting nutrition, just not a lot. Should I make that clearer?


"lived on her own afterword" <-- afterward
~x~
:X Sorry, lol.


Were her parents the only cats she ever spoke with?
~x~
Yes.

[Ten]

"I meant broken-mackerel, but would that still not work?"
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mm... a dapple is more like a spot.


"The implausibility of it. Would you like me to add that to the application?"
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Yes, please clarify that.


"I meant amber."
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x) okay.


"If you would like me to mention him, would you like me to name him as well?"
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Nah, he doesn't need a name.


"Different personalities. They didn't get along well."
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What in her upraising produced such a different personality? Why didn't they get along?


"Speckletail was getting nutrition, just not a lot. Should I make that clearer?"
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Yes... but if she had enough to hunt, what did she die from?


"Yes."
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Why did she never speak to any other cats?