Post by missmay on Dec 5, 2009 13:33:20 GMT -5
I think it would be cool if some cats would find a way out of the walls to the world on the other side. Maybe Thunderclan, Riverclan, and Shadowclan could become apart of the main plot.
Read something I made up.
(This is from the bio of my cat Spark) just something to think about...
When Sparkpaw was just a kit, her mother and father left the walls that uncaged Riverclan. It is said that their are tunnels out of the walls. Ever since, Sparkpaw has dreamed of leaving the walls. She bleaves that one day she will find a way out. She hopes that when she leaves she will find the other Legendary clans, Thunderclan, Windclan, and Shadowclan.
Sparkpaw padded over to the wall followed by one of her friends. She started to the search the walls for a way out. Sadly there was none. She slammed her herself against the wall. It hardly moved. She growled angerly.
A sound came from above. A crack. Some sticks and stones fell with a thud. When the sticks and stones hit the ground, the dusty ground puffed up in a cloud of blinding dust.
When the dust cleared. Sparkpaw looked around. A shiny stone caught her eye. She moved over to it. She dug it out and looked closer at it. It look magical. When she picked it up with her paw, It was light and tinkled with the only light that came through the walls.
She looked up at wall. The sticks and stones that had fell let light flood in. She looked around on the ground. The light's ray landed on her and made her fur warm. It was the first warmth she had felt since she was a kit. She smiled. She could make out the tops of green trees on the other side. Lucky she thought. "We have to live in a dust dry world, while out behind the walls animals live happly." she whispered sadly. She wanted to get a better look. She started to climb.
When she reached the hole she looked at the other side. A bigger deeper river was just on the other side. It made sense. Where on the ground on the other side of the wall was a dry river bank and on the other a water bigger river. There were trees on the other side. A shape moved on the other side. Scared eyes looked up at hers. It was a cat.
She smiled and mewed hi. "hi" the cat replied. Another cat figure appeared. He looked like an older tom, maybe a mentor or something. He flicked his tail for his apprentice to follow. He must not have seen her. Sparkpaws pelt blended into the wall. Only if you look closely you could pick out a cats shape. She looked down the wall on the other side trying to see if there was a way down. There was not, only if you jumped you would fall to your death.
Sadly she shook her head and started to cry. "Why me?" she asked herself and starclan. She climbed down and stat by the wall. She piled some sticked that had fallen and climbed up and placed the sticks over the hole. Careful not to cover to total so it was get stuck. She climbed back down and vowed. "I will never forget what I saw...." she whispered and with that she walked further into the Riverclans home that had been long for gotten. She hoped his could find something to share with the clan.
Read something I made up.
(This is from the bio of my cat Spark) just something to think about...
When Sparkpaw was just a kit, her mother and father left the walls that uncaged Riverclan. It is said that their are tunnels out of the walls. Ever since, Sparkpaw has dreamed of leaving the walls. She bleaves that one day she will find a way out. She hopes that when she leaves she will find the other Legendary clans, Thunderclan, Windclan, and Shadowclan.
Sparkpaw padded over to the wall followed by one of her friends. She started to the search the walls for a way out. Sadly there was none. She slammed her herself against the wall. It hardly moved. She growled angerly.
A sound came from above. A crack. Some sticks and stones fell with a thud. When the sticks and stones hit the ground, the dusty ground puffed up in a cloud of blinding dust.
When the dust cleared. Sparkpaw looked around. A shiny stone caught her eye. She moved over to it. She dug it out and looked closer at it. It look magical. When she picked it up with her paw, It was light and tinkled with the only light that came through the walls.
She looked up at wall. The sticks and stones that had fell let light flood in. She looked around on the ground. The light's ray landed on her and made her fur warm. It was the first warmth she had felt since she was a kit. She smiled. She could make out the tops of green trees on the other side. Lucky she thought. "We have to live in a dust dry world, while out behind the walls animals live happly." she whispered sadly. She wanted to get a better look. She started to climb.
When she reached the hole she looked at the other side. A bigger deeper river was just on the other side. It made sense. Where on the ground on the other side of the wall was a dry river bank and on the other a water bigger river. There were trees on the other side. A shape moved on the other side. Scared eyes looked up at hers. It was a cat.
She smiled and mewed hi. "hi" the cat replied. Another cat figure appeared. He looked like an older tom, maybe a mentor or something. He flicked his tail for his apprentice to follow. He must not have seen her. Sparkpaws pelt blended into the wall. Only if you look closely you could pick out a cats shape. She looked down the wall on the other side trying to see if there was a way down. There was not, only if you jumped you would fall to your death.
Sadly she shook her head and started to cry. "Why me?" she asked herself and starclan. She climbed down and stat by the wall. She piled some sticked that had fallen and climbed up and placed the sticks over the hole. Careful not to cover to total so it was get stuck. She climbed back down and vowed. "I will never forget what I saw...." she whispered and with that she walked further into the Riverclans home that had been long for gotten. She hoped his could find something to share with the clan.
