Smokefeather

[jagg]

Role player| Jagg
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Name| Smokefeather

Gender| Tom

Physical Description| A smoky gray tom with green eyes and a smoky gray tail.

Views| He thinks he could be a medicine cat if they took down some wall. He believes the clan needs to stay together.

Kin| Mother- Cedarfoot (deceased) Father- Windfur (deceased)

History| His father and mother died. His father, from trying to be leader and his mother from an adder bite. He got his name because while he sat, waiting for his name, a feather drifted over from somewhere and landed right in front of him.

Picture| www.freewebs.com/squirrel_star/Member%20Pictures/Windclan/Jaggedclaw%20Windclan%20Warrior%20Gray%20long%20haired%20cat.jpg

[Ten]

You know you can modify your posts, right?


"Name| Smokefeather"
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Did you read the name rules?
Or my note about using complete sentences?


"He thinks he could be a medicine cat"
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Nope. Those no longer exist.


"if they took down some wall"
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Is he insane?


"He believes the clan needs to stay together."
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There is no Clan. What you mean is, he wants the Clan to reform?


"His father, from trying to be leader"
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Did his opposition murder him?


"a feather drifted over from somewhere"
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One, that wouldn't happen, and two, it wouldn't warrant a suffix.