Post by Ten on Jul 1, 2009 19:03:03 GMT -5
You can remove the parenthesis, you know.
"Firestep"
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How does she step like fire?
"Eyes are huge and bright, icy blue that penetrates deep into your mind, your soul, your spirit."
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Is that supposed to be funny?
"She also has onyx tipped ears."
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You've seen a cat with ears like that?
"and her strange look-alike of a small wildfire"
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How would they know about fire?
"Her parents died of drinking posion"
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Poison? How would they have access to poison?
"living only long enough to a moon"
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You know they can't see the lunar phases, right?
Do you have permission to use that picture?
