Post by Ten on Jul 1, 2009 18:58:22 GMT -5
"American Shorthair, Calico in color."
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Did you miss the note about complete sentences?
"Her eyes are naturally light green, yet, when the sun shines in them, deer brown."
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I've known eyes to be lighter in the sun, but not darker in the sun.
Have you seen cat eyes like these?
"But, unlike most kits, she has always walked in the ways of a Medicine Cat"
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Did you read the plot?
"She trust's" <-- no apostrophe
"almost any leader that will trust her first."
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What do you mean?
"Raintalon"
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Does she have talons?
"She was born on the 13th day of the 3rd month."
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By what calender?
"but the cat that was leader at the time"
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There's not even a Clan anymore, much less a leader.
mm... that picture looks like a torbie.
