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Post by littlepelt on Jun 30, 2009 10:57:41 GMT -5
Role player| Littlepelt or Caitlyn _____
Name| Littlepelt
Gender| she-cat
Physical Description| Littlepelt is a small, swift cat. Most cats would mistake her as a mid-aged apprentice, yet she is a warrior. Her eyes are a bright green, like most white cats. Although she is a fast cat, her legs are short, along with her fur.
Views| Littlepelt would like to lead, but doesn't want to take charge. She thinks not many cats will want her to lead, and she stays out of most of it.
Kin| Eagleclaw(mother,) Fogpelt(father,) Darkshadow(brother,) Honeypaw(sister,) Featherwind(sister.) All deceased.
History| Littlepelt was very close to her brother when he was alive. But at first glance most couldn't tell that they were kin, because of their fur color: Littlepelt had almost pure white fur, and Darkshadow had dark black fur. But once you met them, you could tell. Littlepelt was nearly killed by a attack from a rouge, leaving a large scar on her neck. She lost her brother when a large piece of wood fell on him, same thingwith her sister, Featherwind. Featherwind was about to have her second litter of kits, and no one knows what happened to the first litter. Littlepelt lost Eagleclaw from the same rouge that tried to kill her, and Fogpelt died trying to save his mate at the same time.
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Post by Ten on Jun 30, 2009 11:15:00 GMT -5
"Littlepelt" -- o.o Her pelt is little?
"Littlepelt would like to lead," -- Why?
"but doesn't want to take charge." -- If she wants to lead, why not?
"She thinks not many cats will want her to lead," -- ...she's a wuss?
"and she stays out of most of it." -- What do you mean?
"Eagleclaw(mother,)" -- How would they know about eagles?
"Darkshadow(brother,)" -- Is this being redundant or... telling us he has a dark shadow?
"Honeypaw(sister,)" -- How would they know about honey?
"Featherwind(sister.)" -- How would they know about feathers?
"But at first glance most couldn't tell" -- Who was bothering to give it any thought?
"But once you met them, you could tell." -- How so?
"Littlepelt was nearly killed by a attack from a rouge" -- Rouge is the French word for red, and if you meant rogue... well, there's no Clan, so what do you mean?
"She lost her brother when a large piece of wood fell on him" -- o.o ...from the ceiling?
"no one knows what happened to the first litter" -- So what happened to it?
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