Tinykit

[kallie]

{WIP}

Role player| Kallie <3
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Name| Tinykit (although his name ends in -kit, Tinykit is actually a rather elderly cat)

Gender| Tom

Physical Description|

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Kin|

[/b] a deceased black tom with yellow-orange eyes. Shortclaw was a short-tempered and somewhat agressive cat, and hardly gave anybody but himself the time-of-day. He died by a rat-bite.

Weakear. a deceased calico she-cat with brown eyes. Weakear became insane by her middle-aged months, and began to starve to death because of reasons of her insanity (she believed that starving would bring a Clan, etc. etc.), and died without a care in the world.[/ul]
History| (how they got their name, what their upraising was like, what happened to their kin, and anything relevant in the past)

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[Ten]

"(although his name ends in -kit, Tinykit is actually a rather elderly cat)"
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You can say this in the Physical Description or History (or mention it in both).


"Tinykit has exceptionally long and skinny whiskers, although they seem to have little use of sense,"
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Is that a common disorder among cats?


"seeing as whenever he pokes his head through a crack, he can't seem to judge how big it is, often getting his head stuck for a bit of time."
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I'm not sure how plausible that is.
First off, even if he were able to get his head through a crack, why would he do that? Also, if his head were stuck, his eyes would be exposed to much more light that they're used to seeing, so I'd imagine that'd be painful.


"by her middle-aged months," <-- no comma there