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Post by Ten on May 17, 2009 14:35:16 GMT -5
"slightly muscular, but not much different from the average cat."
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Did you miss the part where I said to use complete sentences?
"Eyes are a cerulean blue"
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You know that's a privilege, right?
"Goldenmist"
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How does she have a mist?
"it was thought that this was due to his strangely patterned stripes"
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How are they patterned?
"His mother was killed by a fox while hunting,"
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Why would a fox be in the enclosure?
"his father died of greencough as an elder"
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Is that an actual disease?
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Gosh
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Friends, as they say, may come and go, but high-powered laser weapons are forever.%\1\%
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Post by Gosh on May 17, 2009 16:39:29 GMT -5
"OOC| I will post the applications for Rainfur, Goldenmist, Shadowclaw, and Leaftail (No relation to Waterstripe) soon!"
No offense, but don't you think you should concentrate on roleplaying with your first cat before you apply for more? I made my first cat on Oct 10, 2008; my second on Nov 10, 2008; and my third on Dec 1, 2008. x3
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✖ s a n n i
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"Because I'm just a mean son of a b**ch." - Dr. Gregory House
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Post by ✖ s a n n i on May 17, 2009 16:44:10 GMT -5
I thought I did pretty okay.
No offense, but don't you think you should concentrate on roleplaying with your first cat before you apply for more? I made my first cat on Oct 10, 2008; my second on Nov 10, 2008; and my third on Dec 1, 2008. x3
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I didn't actually have a time in mind when I said "soon"
You know that's a privilege, right?
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A privilege? Are you kidding me?
Did you miss the part where I said to use complete sentences?
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Actually, I did. I just rushed through it.
How does she have a mist?
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I don't know. I thought of that name a while ago. I liked it, so I kept it.
How are they patterned?
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Zebras and tigers have "patterned" stripes.
Why would a fox be in the enclosure?
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Why wouldn't a fox be in the enclosure? It can happen. It's not impossible
Is that an actual disease?
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I thought this was a warriors roleplay. I went by the book.
Well, that's all I've got, so whatever. I deleted it since apparently it wasn't as good as I thought it was. 
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Post by Ten on May 17, 2009 18:47:05 GMT -5
o.o you deleted your post? "I thought I did pretty okay." -- It was incomplete, so there's no way to judge. "A privilege? Are you kidding me?" -- -motions towards Stats table- Blue eyes are less common than other eye colors. "I don't know." -- Did you read the name rules? "Zebras and tigers have 'patterned' stripes." -- I was asking about this cat in specific. Mackerel? "Why wouldn't a fox be in the enclosure?" -- Because there's no getting in and out if you're larger than a lizard and the enclosure was built decades ago. "I thought this was a warriors roleplay." -- In loose terms. Starless is a site of a different sort. "I deleted it since apparently it wasn't as good as I thought it was. I'll join when I can live up to these expectations" -- This is the standard evaluation process. If you look around, you'll notice that I've responded with posts like this on every bio on the site. I'm not singling this one out or trying to tell you it's bad. |
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