Ivystep

[ivystep]

Role player| Ivystep
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Name| Ivystep

Gender| She-cat

Physical Description| Ivystep is a beautiful calico she-cat who lives along with her clan mates. She have blue eyes and her calico spots are either black, gray, or orange.

Views| Yes. She believes the clans should stay together. She is very enthusiastic.

Kin| Orangeheart- Mother
Featherstripe- Sister *Dead
Father- Toadstream *Dead
Orantail- Mate

History| She was born into the clan. She got the name Ivystep because when she was a kit she liked to play in the Ivy. Siste and father killed by rats. Orantail and her were kithood lovers. Meaning she loved him ever since she was a kit.

Picture| www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://yourcatcareguide.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/calico-kitty.JPG&imgrefurl=http://yourcatcareguide.com/wordpress/%3Fp%3D286&h=195&w=340&sz=32&tbnid=WbVpeIUxCWy9kM:&tbnh=68&tbnw=119&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dcalico%2Bkitty&zoom=1&q=calico+kitty&usg=__3B65qGhV6TbKVAlev5rG6DhycKk=&sa=X&ei=RX-OTZ6OLaOB0QH9kJ2cCw&ved=0CCMQ9QEwAQ

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[Ten]

Hello Ivystep. :3

I think this
yourcatcareguide.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/calico-kitty.JPG
is the link you meant to use.


"Ivystep is a beautiful calico she-cat"
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This is subjective. Some cats might find her beautiful, some might not. Instead of calling her beautiful, describe what traits make her beautiful.


"She have blue eyes" <-- has?


"and her calico spots are either black, gray, or orange."
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I think you mean that her spots are black, white, and orange.


"She believes the clans should stay together."
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I'm not sure you understood the plot. You might want to look over it again.
Anyway, how come?



"Featherstripe- Sister *Dead
Father- Toadstream *Dead
Orantail- Mate"
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How would they know about feathers or toads?
Also, what's an oran?


"She got the name Ivystep because when she was a kit she liked to play in the Ivy."
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Do you understand the setting?


"Siste" <-- Sister?