iceheart

[Nefeli]

role player|| Nefeli/Feli
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name|| Iceheart

gender|| she-cat

physical description|| Iceheart has a slim build and large paws. One of her ears are larger than the other, and her whiskers are shorter than average. She has a bad sense of smell, and she has an ugly scar on one of her legs. She has snow-white fur with pale grey ears.

Iceheart is a very petite she-cat, being quite small and slim. Her eyes are a dark leaf-green, and her tail is pointed. Her chest and ears are a pale grey.

views|| Iceheart is a pure Clanner. She believes that a Clan would be better, for she wants to have order and she thinks that the unity of a Clan would do everyone some good; there would be less maiming and killing. She believes that the warrior code does not tolerate killing without a very good reason, such as if the cat was in great danger from the other cat, or a cat was going to die from a painful sickness anyway, so killing the cat then would end the cat's suffering. She thinks a leader to depend on and make decisions would be better.

Iceheart is also quite ambitious, for she wants nothing more than to be the leader or deputy of a Clan. She believes she would be a good leader because of her dedication, fairness, integrity, and good heart. Iceheart is a very close-minded, however. She is quite intolerant of beliefs that are not her own, and she is rather closed to new ideas.

kin||
duskstone -- mother {not being roleplayed}
tallstep -- father {not being roleplayed}
shortpaw -- brother {not being roleplayed}
whitestripe -- brother {deceased}

history||
Iceheart was the last kit born in a litter of three kits, in the dark season. Her mother and father were both Clanners, and brought Iceheart and her brothers up to be the same.

She was mentored by her mother, Duskstone. Her brother, Whitestripe was mentored by her father. Her other brother, Shortpaw, was also mentored by Tallstep. Her parents gave her the name Iceheart when she was two and a half seasons old for her ivory fur and heartiness.

When she was 4 seasons old, her brother Whitestripe was injured and killed by another cat. Iceheart was overcome with grief, for she had loved him the most of her two brothers. Later on, she met a young tom named Russetfur by the stream.

He understood her grief; for he had just lost his sister to the sickness. They got to know each other well over the next few days, eventually realizing they were in love. They have not mated yet; they don't want to, for they believe that kits are a burden to raise. They still love each other like they were mates, though.

pic||

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[Ten]

"Iceheart is one of the most beautiful she-cats"
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Beauty is subjective.


"However, she has her flaws. Her claws are short and thick,"
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I've never noticed any genetic variation in claws. Have you seen claws like these?


"she is not a good hunter, usually taking a long time to catch prey."
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This is something to show in the History section.


"She has snow-white fur with pale grey markings visible on her face."
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What kind of markings?


"Her strongest muscles are in her legs."
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...as opposed to her arms?


"She believes that a Clan would be better, for she dislikes battles"
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How is disliking battles a reason for joining a Clan?


"and she thinks that the unity of a Clan would do everyone some good."
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Why?


"Iceheart is also quite ambitious, for she wants nothing more than to be the leader or deputy of a Clan."
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Why?


"whitestripe"
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Makes me think of the band. x)


"Her other brother, Shortpaw, was not mentored until Whitestripe was given his full name."
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Really? Why the wait?
Kits learn better at a younger age.


"Sparrowfur"
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How would they know about sparrows?


"They mated soon after, each loving the other more than ever."
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Did they have kits? Is he still alive?

[Nefeli]

"Beauty is subjective"
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Fixed.

"Have you seen claws like these"
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no, fixed.

"
"something to show in the History section."
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Okay, done.

"What kind of markings?"
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Tabby markings

"...as opposed to her arms?"
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Yup.

"How is disliking battles a reason for joining a Clan?"
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It's not. Fixed.

"Why"
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I've added a reason.

"Why"
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Added some stuff..

"Why the wait?
Kits learn better at a younger age."
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Because there were three kits, and only two parents. Her mother or father couldn't mentor two kits at once, so they had to delay Shortpaw's training.

"How would they know about sparrows?"
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Changed to Russetfur.

"Did they have kits? Is he still alive?"
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Nope. He's still alive because it doesn't say "deceased" next to him in the kin section.

[Ten]

"Tabby markings"
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Only on her face?


"Yup."
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...She has arms?


"I've added a reason."
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Please let me know what you've added in your reply posts.
What was the reason?


"Her mother or father couldn't mentor two kits at once"
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Why not?


"He's still alive"
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Are they still together?
Will she be interacting with him off-screen, so to speak, or what?

[Nefeli]

"Only on her face?"
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Some on her legs and body.

Apparently, the changes I made aren't showing up for some reason. D:

"...She has arms?"
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Yah, cats have arms. o-o

"Please let me know what you've added in your reply posts.
What was the reason?"
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She thinks that the unity of a Clan would do everyone some good; there would be less maiming and killing, and she would like a leader to depend on and make decisions.

"Why not?"
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I don't know. :x

"Are they still together?
Will she be interacting with him off-screen, so to speak, or what?"
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Yes, they are still together. And yeah, she will be, I suppose.

[Ten]

"Some on her legs and body."
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So she's a gray tabby?


"Apparently, the changes I made aren't showing up for some reason."
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/frown. huh. Don't know why it's doing that.


"Yah, cats have arms."
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I call those "front legs".


"She thinks that the unity of a Clan would do everyone some good; there would be less maiming and killing,"
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How would having a Clan reduce maiming and killing?


"She believes she would be a good leader because of her leadership qualities and good heart."
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This is like saying she thinks she'd make a good leader because she'd make a good leader. What are her leadership qualities?


"I don't know."
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Then they would have.


"And yeah, she will be, I suppose."
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hm. You think you can manage that?

[Nefeli]

"So she's a gray tabby?"
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No, I have changed that.

"I call those "front legs"."
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wiki.answers.com/Q/Do_cats_have_arms

"How would having a Clan reduce maiming and killing?"
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The warrior code...?

"This is like saying she thinks she'd make a good leader because she'd make a good leader. What are her leadership qualities?"
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A vision, integrity, dedication, fairness.. etc.

"Then they would have."
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k. changed.

"hm. You think you can manage that?"
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Dunno. I might roleplay him.. :/

[Ten]

"No, I have changed that."
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To?


Wikianswers is a wiki, Nefeli.
Anyway, how can her back legs be stronger than her front legs?


"A vision, integrity, dedication, fairness.. etc."
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Put what qualities she thinks she has, then, for her reasoning.
...She's not perfect, is she?


"The warrior code...?"
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Not everyone remembers the warrior code or has the same beliefs about it. Add hers.


"I might roleplay him.."
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Would you interact with yourself a lot?

[Nefeli]

"To?"
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Just a white cat.

"Anyway, how can her back legs be stronger than her front legs?"
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She uses them more to jump.

":Put what qualities she thinks she has, then, for her reasoning.
...She's not perfect, is she?"
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Done. :3

"Not everyone remembers the warrior code or has the same beliefs about it. Add hers."
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Added: She believes that the warrior code does not tolerate killing without a very good reason.

"Would you interact with yourself a lot?"
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lol, of course not. I'll just do what you said, have her interact with him offscreen.

[Ten]

"She uses them more to jump."
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She jumps more than she walks?


"She believes that the warrior code does not tolerate killing without a very good reason."
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What does she count as a good reason?