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Post by rainbows on Jul 7, 2010 13:17:15 GMT -5
Role player| you can call me rainbows, or shads if you wish.
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Name| mousevoice [/color=white] Gender|[/color] female
Physical Description| Mousevoice is a long, skinny she-cat, rather unusual compared to the larger cats in the enclosure. She has long limbs and a thin, winding tail, dipped in black at the end. Few stripes touch his limbs and tail, but she is a solid silver elsewhere, though lighter on her face, underbelly, and legs. She has dull blue eyes, looking as if uninterested about the world around her. Her whiskers are long and almost translucent. However, the most striking feature about her is her scar, shining a brighter silver than her already noticeable pelt. It stretches from the middle of the tip of her spine, slanting down her ribs on the right side and ending up just short of her thigh.
Views| This she-cat wants the cats to stick together and form a clan once more, letting the strongest and wisest fight out to be leader and deputy. The medicine cat can easily be picked out, it will be the only one who knows much about herbs and will only if provoked enough. She wants to be leader, and will do anything she can to achieve it.
Kin| mother - dirtclaw, father - fleckpelt, sister - boneflash, brother - gingerfeet
History| (how they got their name, what their upraising was like, whether they claimed a territory, what happened to their kin, anything relevant in the past)
Picture| (optional; an image of the cat - if it expands the post size when shown as an image, leave it as a link)
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Post by Ten on Jul 7, 2010 13:37:35 GMT -5
"Mousevoice"
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Have a particular species of mouse you think would be living in the enclosure? I'm wondering if they would have the same niche as the rats, which would put them in competition with one another.
"Mousevoice is a long, skinny she-cat, rather unusual compared to the larger cats in the enclosure."
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For a moment there I thought you meant that all the other cats are really big. You're just saying she's long-bodied and bony?
"Few stripes touch his" <-- her?
"limbs and tail, but she is a solid silver elsewhere, though lighter on her face, underbelly, and legs"
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Is she a ticked tabby?
"She has dull blue eyes,"
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Blue eyes cost 250 LTs.
"looking as if uninterested about the world around her."
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When you say "as if", does that mean she's not uninterested?
"However, the most striking feature about her is her scar, shining a brighter silver than her already noticeable pelt."
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I'm not sure how a scar could be that bright a silver. Aren't scars black or pink? How could it be brighter than her pelt?
"It stretches from the middle of the tip of her spine, slanting down her ribs on the right side and ending up just short of her thigh."
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Isn't the tip of a cat's spine at their tail? Or is that a different set of bones?
"The medicine cat can easily be picked out, it will be the only one who knows much about herbs"
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With no StarClan and no plants, medicine cats aren't an issue.
"mother - dirtclaw,"
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Dirt is the word cats use for poo, so... a little too dishonorable there.
"brother - gingerfeet"
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The standard suffix is foot -- what influenced you to choose feet?
"sister - boneflash"
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mm... Didn't we talk about this name already?
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