Brain
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Bluekit
Jul 17, 2009 11:30:01 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 17, 2009 11:30:01 GMT -5
"How did she spoil him?" --- By always hunting for him.
"Why did his mother's death make him insane but not his siblings?" --- Barkpaw was dead and Sandfur kept herself busy by hunting.
"Is there nothing more you can say here?" --- He's out of shape from never hunting.
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Bluekit
Jul 17, 2009 11:36:34 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 17, 2009 11:36:34 GMT -5
"By always hunting for him." -- Then say that.
"Sandfur kept herself busy by hunting." -- So because she hunted, her mother's death had no effect on her?
"He's out of shape from never hunting." -- Describe that, then.
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Brain
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Bluekit
Jul 17, 2009 12:08:23 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 17, 2009 12:08:23 GMT -5
"So because she hunted, her mother's death had no effect on her?" --- It took her mind off her mothers death.
"Describe that, then." --- How?
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Bluekit
Jul 17, 2009 12:11:37 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 17, 2009 12:11:37 GMT -5
"How?" -- Are you telling me you don't know how to describe a cat?
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Brain
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Bluekit
Jul 18, 2009 12:45:35 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 18, 2009 12:45:35 GMT -5
"Are you telling me you don't know how to describe a cat?" --- Isn't "out of shape" description enough?
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Bluekit
Jul 18, 2009 16:56:56 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 18, 2009 16:56:56 GMT -5
You can do more than that, can't you?
"His mother, knowing he could never learn to hunt, spoiled him." -- Say how she spoiled him.
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Bluekit
Jul 31, 2009 13:34:09 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 31, 2009 13:34:09 GMT -5
You can do more than that, can't you? --- He has short fur.
"Say how she spoiled him." --- By hunting for him.
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Bluekit
Jul 31, 2009 13:41:36 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 31, 2009 13:41:36 GMT -5
"He has short fur." -- Most cats do. Is that all you can say?
"By hunting for him." -- I mean say it in the bio, silly goose.
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Brain
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Bluekit
Aug 1, 2009 10:14:34 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Aug 1, 2009 10:14:34 GMT -5
"I mean say it in the bio, silly goose." --- Did I forget to put it in there?
"Most cats do." --- Then I'll leave that out.
"Is that all you can say?" --- Other than missing his right eye, he's perfectly normal.
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Bluekit
Aug 1, 2009 10:44:30 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Aug 1, 2009 10:44:30 GMT -5
"Did I forget to put it in there?" -- mmhm, I don't see it.
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