Brain
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Bluekit
Jul 15, 2009 16:04:07 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 15, 2009 16:04:07 GMT -5
"It's his eye. Aren't eye injuries prone to infection?" --- That doesn't mean they ALWAYS get infected.
"mmkay. Does he think no one can escape if they're not united?" --- Yes.
"Did all her previous family members only have litters of two or less?" --- Not all.
"Just enough to survive" --- The hunting basics.
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Bluekit
Jul 15, 2009 17:07:19 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 15, 2009 17:07:19 GMT -5
"That doesn't mean they ALWAYS get infected." -- So Bluekit got a random miracle just because you say so? Have you researched eye injuries?
"Yes." -- Why?
"Not all." -- Then why the tradition?
"The hunting basics." -- As in what? What prey is he able to hunt and kill?
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Bluekit
Jul 16, 2009 10:42:52 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 16, 2009 10:42:52 GMT -5
"So Bluekit got a random miracle just because you say so?" --- I think I'll change that to a birth defect.
"As in what? What prey is he able to hunt and kill?" --- He has no depth perception. He can't hunt anything.
Why? --- He's insane. He doesn't think right.
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Bluekit
Jul 16, 2009 14:20:59 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 16, 2009 14:20:59 GMT -5
"He can't hunt anything." -- So... he'll die soon?
"He's insane." -- Even the insane have reasons. Why does he think they must be united to escape?
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Bluekit
Jul 16, 2009 16:17:29 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 16, 2009 16:17:29 GMT -5
"So... he'll die soon?" --- Sandfur hunts for him.
"Why does he think they must be united to escape?" --- He thinks two heads are better than one.
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Bluekit
Jul 16, 2009 16:33:34 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 16, 2009 16:33:34 GMT -5
"Sandfur hunts for him." -- Add that, then.
"He thinks two heads are better than one." -- Why?
"He is now the crankiest elder in the walls." -- How is he cranky?
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Bluekit
Jul 17, 2009 10:08:43 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 17, 2009 10:08:43 GMT -5
"How is he cranky?" --- Forget that part.
"He thinks two heads are better than one." -- "Why?" --- Because they could think of a way out.
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Bluekit
Jul 17, 2009 10:20:55 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 17, 2009 10:20:55 GMT -5
"Because they could think of a way out." -- So he thinks no one can come up with a good plan without collaborative thinking?
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Brain
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Bluekit
Jul 17, 2009 10:37:13 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 17, 2009 10:37:13 GMT -5
So he thinks no one can come up with a good plan without collaborative thinking? --- Exactly.
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Bluekit
Jul 17, 2009 11:06:37 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 17, 2009 11:06:37 GMT -5
"Bluekit is a blue-gray elder with one green eye." -- Is there nothing more you can say here?
"His mother, knowing he could never learn to hunt, spoiled him." -- How did she spoil him?
"He eventually went insane from missing his mother." -- Why did his mother's death make him insane but not his siblings?
"Sandfur now hunts for kim." <-- him?
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