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Sandfur
Jul 12, 2009 11:49:40 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 12, 2009 11:49:40 GMT -5
There aren't enough cats hunting for elders.
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Sandfur
Jul 12, 2009 12:27:54 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 12, 2009 12:27:54 GMT -5
So she wants a Clan so that more cats will be like her mother?
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Sandfur
Jul 12, 2009 13:08:16 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 12, 2009 13:08:16 GMT -5
Essentially, yes.
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Sandfur
Jul 12, 2009 13:11:15 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 12, 2009 13:11:15 GMT -5
Then explain that in her bio.
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Sandfur
Jul 13, 2009 10:39:42 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 13, 2009 10:39:42 GMT -5
okay.
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Sandfur
Jul 13, 2009 11:04:57 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 13, 2009 11:04:57 GMT -5
Now it says she wants cats to be like her mother, but not why - you said she was compassionate but didn't show her doing anything to back up that claim.
"Dunepaw" -- How would they know about dunes?
"She is a sand-colored cat" -- Mackerel tabby?
"Her mother, who was patient and compassionate, mentored her and her brother together. Her mother died soon after Sandfur became a warrior, but before she could mentor Bluekit." -- Was Bluekit from a different litter?
"Sandfur was named for her fur, which is the color of the desert sand." -- This is stating the obvious.
"Sandfur has a small piece of territory near the wall" -- When you role play her, will you have her patrol said area at the wall board?
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Sandfur
Jul 14, 2009 10:56:37 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 14, 2009 10:56:37 GMT -5
How would they know about dunes? --- They're in the middle of the desert.
"Mackerel tabby?" --- Would you describe her as ginger?
"Was Bluekit from a different litter?" --- No.
"When you role play her, will you have her patrol said area at the wall board?" --- Yes.
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Sandfur
Jul 14, 2009 11:15:04 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 14, 2009 11:15:04 GMT -5
"They're in the middle of the desert." -- Do you know what a dune is?
"Would you describe her as ginger?" -- What, the cat in the picture?
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Sandfur
Jul 14, 2009 13:01:47 GMT -5
Post by Brain on Jul 14, 2009 13:01:47 GMT -5
"Do you know what a dune is?" --- Yes. Sand dunes occur naturally in the desert.
"What, the cat in the picture?" --- I guess, assuming ginger could look sand colored.
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Sandfur
Jul 14, 2009 13:13:23 GMT -5
Post by Ten on Jul 14, 2009 13:13:23 GMT -5
"Sand dunes occur naturally in the desert." -- Yes, and they're big dang mountains of sand. There aren't any of those in the enclosure. Wouldn't fit. Besides, it's hard to live in the parts of a desert with dunes.
"I guess" -- That cat looks weird. Maybe someone edited it, or maybe it's some breed I've never seen before. It doesn't look like a normal cat should.
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