Thistle
Apprentice
noisy cricket {1}[M:0]
woah, so liek hai. 8D%\7\%
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Post by Thistle on Feb 13, 2009 7:29:18 GMT -5
So then, what has she done that's reckless or adventurous? --x-- She wandered off when she was a very young kit, taunted experienced fighters as an apprentice, dared to snatch a lizard someone else was stalking and only got away because her father was there to back her up. Things like that.
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Post by Ten on Feb 13, 2009 18:45:39 GMT -5
So she's an idiot.
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Thistle
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noisy cricket {1}[M:0]
woah, so liek hai. 8D%\7\%
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Post by Thistle on Feb 14, 2009 20:24:58 GMT -5
*takes that part out* Now is it okay?
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Post by Ten on Feb 14, 2009 23:49:21 GMT -5
"He often said that she reminded him of his sister; her personality matched her aunt's perfectly." -- What was her aunt like? Did she interact with her often?
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Thistle
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noisy cricket {1}[M:0]
woah, so liek hai. 8D%\7\%
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Post by Thistle on Feb 15, 2009 1:47:24 GMT -5
What was her aunt like? --x-- Bold, cheeky, etc.
Did she interact with her often? --x-- Not really.
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Post by Ten on Feb 15, 2009 10:51:26 GMT -5
"Bold, cheeky, etc." -- How so?
"Not really." -- So then you're saying that the personality was hereditary?
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Thistle
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noisy cricket {1}[M:0]
woah, so liek hai. 8D%\7\%
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Post by Thistle on Feb 22, 2009 4:46:24 GMT -5
I changed her mother's personality. Is it better that way?
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Post by Ten on Feb 22, 2009 11:08:57 GMT -5
"Mudfang gradually began to bond with his difficult daughter" -- No where before in the History do you say she was difficult or how.
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Thistle
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noisy cricket {1}[M:0]
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Post by Thistle on Feb 27, 2009 22:01:19 GMT -5
No where before in the History do you say she was difficult or how. --x-- Better?
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Post by Ten on Feb 27, 2009 22:38:09 GMT -5
She also challenged him a lot, saying that this was the right way to hunt and that was not. -- So if he was harsh and all that, why didn't he straighten her out?
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