moddy
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Post by moddy on Dec 23, 2008 21:23:26 GMT -5
mmkay. :3
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Post by Ten on Dec 23, 2008 21:30:11 GMT -5
"by stealing stuff" What stuff? Prey?
"She had thought" < why "had"?
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moddy
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Post by moddy on Dec 23, 2008 21:38:18 GMT -5
"What stuff? Prey?" Yes, prey. I'll fix that.
"< why "had"?" Not sure, I'll have to go back and read over that part.
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moddy
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noisy cricket {2}[M:0]
.. i'm ditsy. go away. 3:
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Post by moddy on Dec 23, 2008 21:39:56 GMT -5
"< why "had"?" "Not sure, I'll have to go back and read over that part." 'Kay, it was a mistake. I'll fix it.
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