Beetlepaw

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Role player| Modd.
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Name| Beetlepaw

Gender| She-cat

Physical Description| Beetlepaw is a small, and scrawny, brown tabby. Her tail is thin and white-tipped. Some parts of her fur is matted, since she doesn't find it necessary to clean herself often. Her eyes are wide and amber.

Views| Beetlepaw hates the idea of forming a new Clan. She thinks that no one has the right to boss any other cat around, unless that cat is of kit age. She doesn't trust any of the cats around because she thinks that if she does trust them, they will betray her by stealing prey from her, causing her to have less than she needs to survive. So she certainly doesn't want any of them to be leader. She thinks she doesn't need anyone watching after her.

Kin| Her mother was Bluetail and her father was Cricketpelt.

History| There isn't much to say about her.
Beetlepaw was never sure what happened to her mother and father, since she had left them as soon as she could. She thought that she didn't need them and that they were too clingy for her, since they never let her do anything on her own, when clearly she was able to do so, including hunting and just going places on her own. They never gave Beetlepaw her full warrior name because they didn't want her to grow up. She was their only kit and they didn't plan on having another. She is not sure if they are alive at this time or not because she never sees them around anymore.

Picture| Click. ;3

[Ten]

"brown tabby with darker brown stripes."
Isn't that how brown tabbies are supposed to be?

How does she look like a beelte?

"Her tail is rather thin and white-tipped."
The way this is phrased, I read it as rather thin and rather white-tipped. X3
You needn't change it, though.

"doesn't trust any of the cats around" because...?

"She avoids other cats as much as possible"
How then are you planning for her to interact?

"She never found herself suitable to have the job of leader."
Didn't you say she was against having a Clan?

"She thinks doesn't need anyone watching after her."
...is a pronoun missing?

"Not sure if they are deceased or not"
You're not sure or she's not sure?

"she had left them as soon as she could" Why?

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"Isn't that how brown tabbies are supposed to be?"
Yes. I'll just put 'brown tabby' if you prefer...?

"How does she look like a beelte?"
Some beetles are brown, so I was referring to color.

"because...?"
She just doesn't think other cats should be trusted. I can remove that, if you'd like.

"How then are you planning for her to interact?"
I meant that she tries to avoid them, but isn't always successful.

"Didn't you say she was against having a Clan?"
I'll get rid of that, then.

"...is a pronoun missing?"
I'll fix it.

"You're not sure or she's not sure?"
She isn't.

"Why?"
She felt that she didn't need them, and that they were too... clingy.

[Ten]

"She just doesn't think other cats should be trusted." Why?

"I can remove that, if you'd like."
I'd like you to answer my questions; that's all. :3

"isn't always successful" because...?

"She felt that she didn't need them" at what age?

"they were too... clingy." How so?

[moddy]

"Why?"
She fears that they would turn on her.

"I'd like you to answer my questions; that's all. :3"
'Kay. :3

"because...?"
She gets herself caught in a conversation with them, anyways.

"at what age?"
Around 10-12 moons.

"How so?"
They treated her like a kit and she thought that she should've been treated like any other cat, even though she really was a kit.

[Ten]

"She fears that they would turn on her." How so?

"She gets herself caught in a conversation with them"
Then that's not avoiding, is it?

"Around 10-12 moons." She didn't have her warrior name by then?

"They treated her like a kit" by what? Feeding her milk?

Are you adding these things to the bio?

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"How so?"
She thinks that if she gave them her trust, they would use it to their advantage and leave her.

"Then that's not avoiding, is it?"
No, I guess not.

"She didn't have her warrior name by then?"
Apparently not.

"by what? Feeding her milk?"
No. They wouldn't let her do anything by herself, when clearly she was capable of doing so.

"Are you adding these things to the bio?"
Should I be?

[Ten]

"they would use it to their advantage" How so?

"Apparently not." Why not?

"They wouldn't let her do anything by herself" such as...?

"Should I be?" Yus. ^^

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"How so?"
She thinks they would use her, and when they no longer needed her, they would attempt to get rid of her.

"Why not?"
Like I said, her mother and father treated her like a kit. Since she was there only kit, they were trying to /keep/ her from growing up(and, no, they didn't want to just have another litter of kits).

"such as...?"
Hunting, even if it was just for an insect. They wouldn't let her go anywhere alone, either.

"Yus. ^^ "
I am.

[Ten]

"She thinks they would use her"
How would they do that? Be specific.

"they were trying to /keep/ her from growing up" Hm. Okay.

"Hunting, even if it was just for an insect. They wouldn't let her go anywhere alone, either."
What age did this continue to?