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Post by Ten on Jul 17, 2011 15:20:10 GMT -5
Sounds good. Let me know when you've edited the bio.
"Her prefix “Lichen” came from the silver complexion of her fur,"
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Complexion is more of a skin thing than it is for fur.
"(She will have a son, but I won’t introduce him until later)"
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As for what to put there for now, then -- are her other relatives still living?
"He was the only person she really opened up to about living in a house full of Clanners,"
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They don't have houses. I know you're being metaphorical, but if she doesn't want to spend time with them, what's keeping her? Was she dependent on them for food still?
"(From here, I’ll continue with the actions that led up to her son’s existence.)"
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Until you decide to do that, you can remove this bit.\
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Post by f i x a t e on Jul 18, 2011 19:29:42 GMT -5
Complexion is more of a skin thing than it is for fur. ~*~ Changed to: "Her prefix “Lichen” came from the silver striping of her fur," As for what to put there for now, then -- are her other relatives still living? ~*~ Added: "Parents: Deceased Siblings: Alive, but she does not keep in contact with most of them." They don't have houses. I know you're being metaphorical, but if she doesn't want to spend time with them, what's keeping her? Was she dependent on them for food still? ~*~ Changed to: "He was the only person she really opened up to about being surrounded by a group with differing views. She was still too young to survive healthily on her own, so she had no choice but to continue living close to her family." Until you decide to do that, you can remove this bit.\ ~*~ Removed.  |
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